Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Golden Oldie

10/20/09
Golden Oldie by Rita Dove

As I read this poem, I could picture the scene in my head. I could see her sitting in her car in the driveway, sweating from the heat, but too immersed by the lyrics of the song to go. I really like when poets use imagery in their writing. I also liked the insecurity she presented in the last 3 lines. It showed her vulnerability.

1 comment:

  1. Golden Oldie

    I made it home early, only to get
    stalled in the driveway-swaying
    at the wheel like a blind pianist caught in a tune
    meant for more than two hands playing.
    The words were easy, crooned
    by a young girl dying to feel alive, to discover
    a pain majestic enough
    to live by. I turned the air conditioning off,
    leaned back to float on a film of sweat,
    and listened to her sentiment:
    Baby, where did our love go?-a lament
    I greedily took in
    without a clue who my lover
    might be, or where to start looking.

    I Like "IT" The imagery is so vivid. More importantly because the poet takes us to a place where we have been. Listening to a song and lamenting over a lost love. it makes one feel like everything will be okay...we move on.

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